Here's for Microfiction Monday. I got two takes on it this time. Enjoy it n take it on :)
"Three old saints of wood we are,
Mourning today, our Ace went afar.
May his pure soul rest in peace,
May there be no more worries." [;-)]
and
"We four saints went up the hill
To fetch a pail of water,
Jack fell down, had an already broken crown,
But had no Jill, to come after"
p.s.- Bit busy, will read your blogs soon.
Have a nice week ahead,
Chandana C. Shekar
30 comments:
Oh, I particularly love the second one! Fantastic! You are so very clever and delightfully funny! Just the laugh/smile I needed for the evening! Thank you! Have a wonderful week, Chandana!
Sylvia
Thanks Sylvia. U are super fast :) ur comments come so soon.. Thanks so much :)
I agree with Sylvia on this one Dr.
You are just so clever and funny.
Have a great week !
I liked the second one.. :-) Great way to start my day
These are both great. Well done on the picture. Thanks for stopping by my playground. :).
@insignia- thank u :)
@thom- thanks for being here n for the comments
@peggy- thanks so much :)
hahaha!
second one is awesome!! :P
:)
hey!! brilliant that was!
:)
quiet a contrast between the two stories and emotions!
good work!
@neha and sorcerer- thank u so much :)
The first is poignant. Nicely done.
Enjoyable interpretations, both of them. Well done :-)
Very clever and funny rhymes!
I enjoyed them both, but laughed out loud at no Jill in the second.
(and wow, 2! I can hardly get one done LOL)
Great double header!
hey chandana good ones bith the maid and this ...
buddy thanks ya
Dr thanks...i am so used to this buddy word heheh
@southlakesmom and pat- thank u :)
@susan- well the second was a very spontaneous one. just happened. thanks for the picture :)
@christopher- thank u
@karthik- thank u
@ramesh- heheh ;-)
Nicely done! They are both good, but I especially like the second!
thanks so much tara :)
Oh delightful!
I too liked the second one..so true..we women know it!
loved the rhyming..
These are both great, Chandana; I particularly liked the "no Jill" part of # 2.
Thanks for becoming a follower of my blog. Have a great week.
I really loved the second one! I bet he wishes he had a Jill now.
I love the second one..
absolutely brilliant...
hugs
shakira
And no Mother Teresa, either!
LOL! Good take.
Two for the price of one. Way to go!
My MM: Afterlife
hahah...good one!!! NO FIR for Jill....lol!!!
Two stories! Thanks for dropping by.My Microfiction
@hope- :)
@Suz- thanks so much :)
@Micheal- my pleasure :) thank u :)
@Janel- thank u :) i bet too :)
@Shakira- thanks. hugs :)
@Quilly- yup :) thanks :)
@Grandma- thank u. will check urs soon :)
@nazish- nice to have u back here :) FIR????
@JOhn- thank u :) my pleasure :)
Hey.. I give you two thumbs up for that... Two antagonistic cognitions..... Cool.. Keep it comin.. Cheers..
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