Okay, for the second week, here's the pic from Microfiction Monday and my take on it.. Lemme know how u liked it..
"Bonjour, My name is Marissa, the maid
I take care of all the orders laid.
Shall clean your mansion and your cars,
Just don't ask me to part with my jars!!"
Cheers,
Chandana C. Shekar
27 comments:
Chandana;
I loved this, I never thought of a maid,,, it's perfect, Glad you joined us, can't wait til next time.
Have a good week ahead.
Chandana, I'm with Peggy -- never thought of a maid and it is perfect! This is fun, isn't it? Glad you've joined in, too! Look forward to next week! Have a great week!
Sylvia
Hmmmm....The lady looks possessive about her jars...But did not think of her as a maid!!
Well done :-)
well done...
a maid...she looks like one now...
Mine is here
Happy Monday!
hugs
shakira
Really very nice.How do you come up with such wonderful rhyming verse?
Hmm, a fixation on jars rushes to books to check the causes. My Twitter Story
that's nice :D :D
Even a maid has personal possessions she would hate to part with ;-)
She's guarding them with her life! LOL
Mine's up.
lolz...thats nice !
Poetry in less than 140 characters. That's quite an accomplishment.
Marissa is quite the multi-talented maid! Clever rhyming post for Microfiction Monday!
thanks peggy :)
@sylvia, thank u :)
@insignia- different perceptions u see ;)
@parthasarathi-thanks for tht :)
@john - well , i didnt understand that. but thanks anyways
@deepa- thank u
@jabblog- yup. even she is human :)
@akelamalu- yeah :) thank u
@nazish- thank u :)
@first50- thank u :)
@pat- thank u :)
oh.. very well take on the pic.. lolzzz
I think it's a little over 140, but still very funny!
@ deepak- thank u :)
@southlakesmom- well, truly speakin, i just counted on an average. so maybe it's 140.. oops!! shall take care next time
sorry am not good at things like this ..
All i see is a Charming lady , working hard without a frown...
Dr Shadabdi express hahaha..my dear friend..am not saying anything more abt this post as everyone already praised it...keep up your cheers buddy..:)
Looks like Marissa is a very busy lady.
The maid! Of course...Good for her for keeping her prize canned goods!
Clever take on the prompt
You'd probably have to go back the era of that picture to find a woman willing to do all of that without being paid. :)
Nicely done!
first time here ..
nice post..
incredible job,
fabulous mm.
mine is up.
She does look a little worried about those jars, doesn't she?
I like this concept and your take on it was creative! The new template is lovely!
:)
Like that illustration.....like from the early sixties.
@bikram- :)
@ramesh- thank u
@janel- yup, she is..:)
@suz- yup :)
@hope- i totally agree.. my maid too takes away quite a part of our money :(
@sorcerer- thank u. thanks for being here :)
@jingle- thank u :)
@neha- ncie to have u here after such a long time
@mama zen- i guess so ;)
@haddock- :-)yeah
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