That lucky day,
When you gave me a smile;
It took my breath away,
As far as a mile.
Those words of yours,
Which melted me hon;
As though I was just ice,
And you were the sun.
With all your love,
And all your care;
I just don't know,
How time flew away.
When I almost thought,
You were really mine;
You shared your life,
With another woman.
I thought and thought,
What do i do??
It was no more 'us',
Just 'me' and 'you'.
I was ready to accept,
That you will never be mine;
But you ruined it all,
When you smiled at me again.
Yours,
Chandana C. Shekar
15 comments:
Loved it Doc Dear...so wonderfully well-written...
"That lucky day,
When you gave me a smile;
It took my breath away,
As far as a mile."...Awww....BEAUTIFUL
Keep Writing...
Love,
Priyanka Kapoor
Woww!!!!! Beautiful :) :)
nice poem chandana.. creative and beautiful... well written
oh my god..awesome lines..only hope it's jus imagination :)
yappa!!! awesome le.. each & everyline very touchy:):)
Thank u so much all of u :)
@ramesh- hope so. im a bit scared it may turn into reality ;) kinda intuitions :(.
@manju- do visit here after ur pg life starts too.. love to have ur comments here. prompt n honest, as always :)
thank u :)le i do visit:) u keep blogging:) Jiyo:) i thot fiction... how come intuitions??? that 2 wit in fear of reality???
Awesome, liked it a lot :)
thats was beautiful...well written :))
Hmmmm...some killer smile it seems...!! ;)
Nice work... :)
Will a smile erase a treachery?It doesn't gel Chandana
Nice poem
"I was ready to accept,
That you will never be mine;
But you ruined it all,
When you smiled at me again." so true lines !!
for ma part " Whn I see him smile n know that it is not for me, that is when I miss him the most" :(
nice post !!
keep smiling :)
Hey That was very nice ya :)
@manju- haage ;)
@anthony- nice to see u here. thank u :)
@mazish and urvahsi- thank u :)
@parthasarthi- it does. the heart goes weak again. it happens, trust me on that.
@deepa- i agree honey.
@shivani- thank u :)
Is Poety part of the syllabus in docotorine??
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