August 30, 2010

Microfiction Monday #4


"Feel like I've been here.
Some kinda deja vu."
"Me too, My Princess,
200 years ago, with You.."

For more on Microfiction Monday, see Susan's Blog.

Cheers,
Chandana C. Shekar


28 comments:

Sylvia K said...

I love it! What a fun and different take on the pic for the day! Enjoy your week! I look forward to the next pic!

Sylvia

deepa kashyap said...

200 years ago ? :O

Neha said...

just one word - WOW

Dr. Chandana Shekar said...

:) thanks all you Ladies:)

Ellie Garratt said...

I loved the way this rhymed. What a unique take on the picture! Loved it.

Have a wonderful week x

Dr. Chandana Shekar said...

Thank You Ellie. have a wonderful week :)

steveroni said...

Your "spiritual" approach to this is attractive, in fact I love it!

Thanks for your visit...did you REALLY need to be reminded that you need a drink???--grin!

PEACE,
Steve (Had my last drink 36 years ago and in Alcoholics Anonymous so I did not have that beer--grin!!!!)

R. Ramesh said...

ya well rhymed Dr ji...and boss thanks ya..good 2 hear that yr health is back to normal..keep up the cheers and make a trip to dubai...wishes

John (@bookdreamer) said...
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John (@bookdreamer) said...

Don't recall it
It's built-up now. then it was a swamp
Oh yes...

Thanks for dropping by to read my 140. Hope your week goes well

G-Man said...

Deja Vu all over again!

Michael G-G said...

Loved the rhyme and the futuristic feel--hope you are feeling better after your virus.

Have a good week.

Bubba said...

Surely it wasn't called 'Coolville' 200 years ago!

Funny fiction!

Suz said...

Golly, I hope she's into that
me, I'd run

Anonymous said...

super fiction... great:)

Insignia said...

:-) What a take!! Loved it!

SouthLakesMom said...

Let's see -- this sign is in West Virginia, which 200 years ago, 1810, was a very wild and unpaved place! Bears, mountain men, and lots of Native Americans!!!

Dr. Chandana Shekar said...

Thanks all of you for dropping by and for all those comments. :)

@Steveroni- Thanks for those comments.. Well, its cold out here and has been raining all through the day and im wrapped up studying. So when I read that post of yours, I sure felt I wanted a drink. But then, unfortunately, Im a non-alcoholic. So I had to settle down for coffee..


@Ramesh- Thank u :) Oh yeah, me coming to Dubai. When I have enough money to shop until I drop dead. Now im unemployed and in front of books. and coz im not going out anywhere, my pocket money is also a bit gone down. So no dubai :(

@John- Thanks for dropping by. Well, Im in India. So I had no idea where this pic was taken. And what I put up was the first fiction that came into my head when I saw the pic. Anyways, maybe it was a swamp but maybe the air there was giving her that feeling??

@G-man- Thank you

@Micheal- Thank you for that. I'm off the viral now. Feeling a lot better. Thank you for asking. I appreciate it :)


@Eric- Sure it wasnt. Just some deja vu that the air gave her :)

@Suz- lol. I would freeze!!


@Insignia and Manju- Thank u :)

@Southlakesmom- Well, I aint in the USA. So i had no idea where this pic was taken.And what I put up was the first fiction that came into my head when I saw the pic. Anyways, maybe it was a swamp but maybe the air there was giving her that feeling?? Maybe she wasn even human then. Some other animal or insect and the princess of those!! OMG!!

Pat said...

Lovely poetry. It sounds like they're vampires....in vogue right now, at least here in the US.

KB said...

This is such a cute MM. Thanks for visiting mine.

Dr. Chandana Shekar said...

@pat- Thank you. Oh yeah, vampires are so in vogue. I have no count as to how many times my sister has read the twilight series..!! Looks like every girls wants an Edward Cullen!! Well, this Vampire thingy kinda explains to Southlakesmom and John, as to why they were deja vu about being there 200 years ago?? What say guys?

@KB- Thank you KB. Thanks for dropping by

EG CameraGirl said...

I love your different take on the theme!

Anonymous said...

Very good! I enjoyed your take on the picture...I think a lot of us have experienced 'deja vue' at some point. Cheers!

Akelamalu said...

Ah deja vu cannot be explained away! :)

humangal said...

aww i like the nostalgic twist to this

thanks for the nice comment on my MM (:

Susan at Stony River said...

Oh I love that -- and wouldn't I love to be somebody's princess! That's a lovely story.

Dr. Chandana Shekar said...

@EG- Thank you :)

@Sylviamorice- Thank yuo :

@Akelamalu- Yup. true. thank you :)

@Susan- hey thanks for droppin by and startin this thread. :) You're a princess sure. And from what I've learnt from your blog, is that you are a very good Queen Mother too :)

@Sophie- Thank you.

Have a nice week all of u :)

Anonymous said...

u r so lucky..i envy u babes ;)