Just penned a poem... random... Don't have the patience to think of a title for it... Suggestions welcome :)
Had heard of love, had read about it,
Knew quite a bit, I have to admit.
Yet you made me feel, it was so very new,
When things between us, started to brew.
Life seemed so good, more perfect than ever,
Was so lovely, even my breath seemed so clear.
Sailing amongst clouds, was I, for sure,
Felt like a princess, with a lot of grandeur.
Moving on one day, to our relationship, you resigned,
Not bothering , what in me, you just left behind.
Yet love you loads hon, day in and day out,
And you're the only guy, I can ever think about.
p.s.- My laptop is so screwed up. It's gone ill. And so have I. Need some rest now :(
Chandana C. Shekar
12 comments:
Simply beautiful !!!! You have penned the deep feelings , in simple words ! I liked it :)
A coincidence here.
I just watched an Amazing Tamil Movie "Vinnai Thandi Varuvaya".
The story is in synch with the poem!
Specially the last para.
You may want to try it if u understand Tamil!
So I suggest the title "Vinnai thandi varuvayaa" which means Will you cross the skies for me?
Simple n sweet... :)
hmmm... abt the title... Vinnai Thaandi Vaaruvaaya / Will you cross the skies for me... wud be nice !!
amazing!!..if tis was random,wonder wat wud've emerged had u given it a serious thought!!
@adreamygal - thanks :)
@karthik - thanks :) unfortunately i can't follow tamil. else i wud've surely watched that movie :)
@bard- thanks dude :)
@arun - thanks :)
@the other person who commented and deleted it before i cud read- why did u do that?
Hey it was me who deleted the comments. I was juggling between diff comments. everytime there was some typo.
The final version s here to see!
@karthickAK - lolz.. k dude. not a prob :)
Nice post :-)
hmm...nice one.. :) title could be "Feeling blue....." ;)
i dont knw y but after readin this I could think of only this n the song "Feeling blue, my heart says can't be, can't be true....."
TC :)
@ pavan- thanks :)
@urvashi- thanks girl :) i shall listen to that song :)
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