September 6, 2010

Microfiction Monday #5

"Leave me alone,
I need to get home."
"Uh oh, Today's meal is thee,
So said my Mrs. Sea."

More about Microfiction Monday at 'Stony River - Susan's Blog'

Have a nice week ahead,
Chandana C. Shekar

22 comments:

Gemma Wiseman aka Pamela Adams said...

A fun and jingly microfiction!

Anonymous said...

A little bit of Poetry, Nice look at Susan's picture. Sorry I couldn't respond last week to your visit over at my place. I was traveling across country with two cats to a new home. Didn't have too much time to visit the internet.

R. Ramesh said...

wow. super supper..:)

Ellie Garratt said...

What a great take on the picture. Just beautiful.

Have a wonderful week x

Peggy said...

I agree with Ellie and the rest.
Beautifully written Dr.

Sylvia K said...

A great take on the pic of the day! Well done! Hope you have a great week!

Sylvia

Diane said...

Great rhyme! :O)

Anonymous said...

I guess that will teach him to be late for supper! I enjoyed this--thanks for sharing. Cheers!

Fay Campbell said...

Yay! I enjoyed that one.

Pat said...

Clever poem for this week's picture. I like it.

Neha said...

great one Doc :)

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

live conversation,
very amusing!

Anonymous said...

Telling the story with clever dialogue? I like it.

A Blog In The Rough said...

uh oh someone's doomed to getting swallowed!

SouthLakesMom said...

When mama says go hunt something down for dinner, Mr. Sea has to comply!

Well done!

Dr. Chandana Shekar said...

@Greyscale territory and Ramesh- Thank you :)

@Bill-Not a prob. thanks for dropping by now. Hope you had a nice journey last week.

@Ellie, Sylvia, Peggy- Thank you.

@Sylviamorice- I like that comment. Thank you.

@A blog in the rough and Southlakesmom- yup :) Thank you :)

@neha, jingle, fay and pat- Thank you :)

@Hope, Diane and the replicant- Thank you :)

R. Ramesh said...

shukriya Dr ji:)

Rajlakshmi said...

awesome... loved this conversation microfiction :)

Anonymous said...

good one le!!! olle fictionu:)

Dr. Chandana Shekar said...

@Ramesh- :)

@Manju n rajlakshmi - Thank u :)

nanda said...

nice series!

Haddock said...

Like that illustration.